Truck on the Highway

My dear TJ indulged my every whim, as usual. I wanted to write haikus.

5, 7, 5.

Here’s TJ’s:

Delicate seed pods
Horny stalks, icy root gobs.
Oh, my achin’ back.

And here’s what came trippin’ off my less poetic fingers:

Truck on the highway
Who’s that dumb chick in the road?
We all have to die.

6 comments

  1. All day we watched Em
    Practice her new big girl tricks
    When can she show you?

    The best is this one:
    She laughs mightily now, stops,
    then laughs a bit more

    How lucky are we
    To have such a creature here
    With us forever?!

  2. It’s not lost on me
    (I forgot to make this clear)
    That it’s all fleeting

    Though I’d like it if
    She remained this way always,
    There’s much more to watch

    I can’t wait to see
    The next phase, then what’s after
    Who will she become?

    Right now though she rests
    Snoring, startling awake,
    Sighing back asleep

  3. Wow, Yo-Nenny: Whole poems make up of haiku. I like them lots, and they make me miss Ember Virginia even more. You’re coming to visit on Saturday morning, right?

  4. Your beautiful poems
    Warm the cockles of my heart
    And so do ‘Leni’s.

    I wish I were a
    tiny sparrow, hidden in
    pine bough and repose

  5. I have two daughters.
    One is green, the other pink.
    Law’, how I love them.

    My granddaughter, too—
    With raven hair and blue eyes—
    Ain’t she just da bomb.

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